JustABot
JustABot
28-09-2017
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Revise my writing and tell me what i can do better.
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alina2000c
alina2000c
28-09-2017
You need a thesis statement in your intro paragraph. "Even" in the first sentence is capitalized even though it is after a comma. Rather than just giving background, try to relate the background info to examples in the novel.
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aliana78781
aliana78781
28-09-2017
Yahhh what she said
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